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waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

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The line graph illustrates, the waste production by 3 different companies over a time period of 15 years, Firstly, it is clear that company A and B have a significant decline in waste producing. While, company C is having a huge increase in waste producing. reaching new records every year. Moreover, Company A was the highest waste producer with 12 tons in waste in 2000, the company still produce a lot of tons but it seems that it's declining and it reached 7 tons in 2015. Also, company B had it's peak of 10 tons in waste (2005), since that the company (B) is seeing a huge fall in waste producing reaching 3 tons of waste in 2015. Furthermore, company C is looking towards a rapid increase in waste producing, from 4 tons to 10 tons of waste in a matter of 15 years. To sum up, both companies A and B is looking towards a good decline in waste production. While, company C is still growing their waste producing.
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it seems that it's declining and it reached 7 tons in 2015.
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B had it's peak of 10 tons in
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(2005), since that the
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(B) is seeing a huge fall in
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producing reaching 3 tons of
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in 2015.
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producing, from 4 tons to 10 tons of
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To sum up, both
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IELTS academic waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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