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The diagrams below show the maps of Riverside Town in 1970 and 2009.

The diagrams below show the maps of Riverside Town in 1970 and 2009. 25pMx
The diagrams illustrate the development the Riverside town from 1970 to 2009. The position of the Residential housing area did not change. In the middle of the map, a Central business district was made up. There was a new residential housing area on the north-western side of the Central business district. Even though the square of the residential housing area and half area of the Central business district mentioned in a triangle. In the behind of residential housing area, there was a recreation area. Another significant development was the construction of a golf course in the east part of the town. The Luxury residential housing area in front of the Airport and the airport is between the golf course and the luxury residential housing area. Interestingly, the area of the golf course is a hexagon. This may involve people in this course. Overall, there were big changes in the two maps, and a comparison of the two maps reveals a change from a small town to a developed city.
The diagrams illustrate the development the Riverside town from 1970 to 2009.

The position of the
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did not
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. In the middle of the map, a Central business district
was made
up. There was a new
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residential
housing
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on the north-western side of the Central business district.
Even though
the square of the
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residential
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and half
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of the Central business district mentioned in a triangle. In the behind of
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residential
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, there was a recreation
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area
. Another significant development was the construction of a golf course in the east part of the town. The Luxury
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residential
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in front of the Airport and the airport is between the golf course and the luxury
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housing
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.
Interestingly
, the
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of the golf course is a hexagon. This may involve
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people
in this course.

Overall
, there were
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in the two maps, and a comparison of the two maps reveals a
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change
from a
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town to a developed city.

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