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The two diagrams describe the main parts of a hot air balloon and indicate how it works. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given below

The two diagrams describe the main parts of a hot air balloon and indicate how it works. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given below 3AJeY
The given picture illustrates the working of a hot air balloon. It is evident that to make the balloon descend, the burners have to be extinguished. The first picture shows the ascending of a hot air balloon. The gas cylinder tank is located at the bottom of the balloon, above which there is a basket that has an arrangement for the passengers to sit or stand. When the burners are on, the balloon envelope inflates and rises. There is a valve at the top of the envelope which is closed when the balloon is increased. The cord of the valve is in the hand of the passengers. The second picture shows the descending hot air balloon. The burners are switched off and the valve cord is pulled as a result of which the valve on the top is opened, and the air is let out. All this deflates the balloon and the balloon descends. So, it can be seen that the hot air balloon is scientifically designed to allow it to ascend or descend and the control of the burners and the valve is in the hands of the passengers. The given picture illustrates the working of a hot air balloon. It is evident that to make the balloon descend, the burners have to be extinguished. The first picture shows the ascending of a hot air balloon. The gas cylinder tank is located at the bottom of the balloon, above which there is a basket that has an arrangement for the passengers to sit or stand. When the burners are on, the balloon envelope inflates and rises. There is a valve at the top of the envelope which is closed when the balloon is increased. The cord of the valve is in the hand of the passengers. The second picture shows the descending hot air balloon. The burners are switched off and the valve cord is pulled as a result of which the valve on the top is opened, and the air is let out. All this deflates the balloon and the balloon descends. So, it can be seen that the hot air balloon is scientifically designed to allow it to ascend or descend and the control of the burners and the valve is in the hands of the passengers.
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picture
illustrates the working of a hot
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air
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balloon
. It is evident that to
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make
the
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balloon
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descend
, the
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burners
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have to
be extinguished
.

The
first
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picture
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shows
the ascending of a hot
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air
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balloon
. The gas cylinder tank
is located
at the bottom of the
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balloon
, above which there is a basket that has an arrangement for the
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passengers
to sit or stand. When the
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burners
are on, the
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balloon
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envelope
inflates and rises. There is a
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valve
at the
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top
of the
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envelope
which
is closed
when the
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balloon
is increased
. The
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cord
of the
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valve
is in the
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hand
of the passengers.

The second
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picture
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shows
the descending hot
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air
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balloon
.
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The
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burners
are switched
off and the
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valve
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cord
is pulled
as a result
of which the
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valve
on the
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top
is opened
, and the
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air
is
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let
out. All this deflates the
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balloon
and the
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balloon
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descends
.
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, it can be
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seen
that the hot
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air
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balloon
is
scientifically
designed to
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allow
it to ascend or
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descend
and the control of the
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burners
and the
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valve
is in the
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hands
of the
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passengers
. The
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given
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picture
illustrates the working of a hot
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air
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balloon
. It is evident that to
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make
the
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balloon
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descend
, the
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burners
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have to
be extinguished
.

The
first
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picture
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shows
the ascending of a hot
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air
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balloon
. The gas cylinder tank
is located
at the bottom of the
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balloon
, above which there is a basket that has an arrangement for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
passengers
to sit or stand. When the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
burners
are on, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
balloon
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envelope
inflates and rises. There is a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
valve
at the
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top
of the
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envelope
which
is closed
when the
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balloon
is increased
. The
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cord
of the
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valve
is in the
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hand
of the passengers.

The second
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picture
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shows
the descending hot
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air
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balloon
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
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burners
are switched
off and the
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valve
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cord
is pulled
as a result
of which the
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valve
on the
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top
is opened
, and the
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air
is
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let
out. All this deflates the
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balloon
and the
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balloon
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descends
.
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So
, it can be
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seen
that the hot
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
air
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
balloon
is
scientifically
designed to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
it to ascend or
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
descend
and the control of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
burners
and the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
valve
is in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hands
of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
passengers
.

IELTS academic The two diagrams describe the main parts of a hot air balloon and indicate how it works. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given below

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
380 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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