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Waste collected by a recycling centre(tons of waste)

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The bar chart gives information about the collection of waste by a recycling center over the period of 4 years, starting from 2011Overall, it is clear that the total amount of waste had likewise trend and fluctuate slightly, the figure for waste paper was highest. In addition, the quantity of garden waste was lowest over the period shown. In 2011, the amount of paper was highest, accounting for 57. While, the quantity of glass was low gradually, took up 48, about 35 was collected by tins, following that, there was 32 tons of waste of garden in this year. In the same year, the amount of collected waste paper hit the lowest point of approximately 40 tons in 2013, before rised remarkable by around 70. but, the figure for glass was lower slightly, well over 50. Around 39 tons of waste was collected by tins and finally 35 for garden
The bar chart gives information about the collection of
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by a recycling center over the period of 4 years, starting from 2011Overall, it is
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clear
that the total amount of
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waste
had
likewise
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trend
and fluctuate
slightly
, the figure for
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waste
paper was highest.
In addition
, the quantity of garden
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waste
was
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lowest
over the period shown. In 2011, the amount of paper was highest, accounting for 57. While, the quantity of glass was low
gradually
, took up 48, about 35
was collected
by tins, following that,
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there was 32 tons
of
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waste
of garden in this year. In the same year, the amount of collected
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waste
paper hit the lowest point of approximately 40 tons in 2013,
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before
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rised
remarkable by around 70.
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but
, the figure for glass was lower
slightly
, well over 50. Around 39 tons of
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waste
was collected
by tins and
finally
35 for
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garden

IELTS academic Waste collected by a recycling centre(tons of waste)

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1 paragraphs
149 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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