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The graph compares how many visitors came to the UK and UK residents who went to theother countries from 1979 to 1999, and the chart illustrates which countries were most popular with British people in 1990. Overall, the number of people who visited Britain and the number of Britons who went to other countries increased, and for UK residents France and Spain were the most popular countries to see. After six years later the growth of visitors abroad by UK residents was increased than people who came from other countries to visit Britain. At the end of the period, the number of British people visiting abroad was about 55 million, which was 17 million more than those who travel to the UK. Traveling to France and Spain was the most popular place for UK visitors to nearly 11 million, while they visited other countries USA, Greece, and Turkey ranging between 2 to 4 million in the year 1999.
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visitors came to the UK and UK residents
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from 1979 to 1999, and the chart illustrates which
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were most popular with British
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in 1990.

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, the number of
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visited Britain and the number of Britons
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went to other
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increased, and for UK residents France and Spain were the most popular
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six years later the growth of visitors abroad by UK residents
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came from other
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to visit Britain. At the
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of the period, the number of British
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visiting abroad was about 55
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, which was 17
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more than those
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travel to the UK.

Traveling to France and Spain was the most popular place for UK visitors to
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, while they visited other
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USA, Greece, and Turkey ranging
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in the year 1999.
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IELTS academic visitors came to the UK and others countries

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158 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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