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Visitor spend every year from 1996 to 2014 by tourist in 5 countries including Australia, USA, UK ,Japan and China. Units are measured in NZ$.

Visitor spend every year from 1996 to 2014 by tourist in 5 countries including Australia, USA, UK, Japan and China. Units are measured in NZ$. 8j85
The graph illustrate the amount spend by the tourists from five different countries, Australia, USA, UK, Japan and China between the period of 1996 to 2014. Overall expenditure shows an increased trend of spending by every country till 2014 and also the highest annual visitors from Australia and the lowest visitors from China in all time In addition, Australia spend highest amount in 2006 and it drop down in 2008. In the case of USA they spend around NZ$ 750 in 1996 and a gradual increase in spending till 2010 but in 2014 it declined. Initially UK spend NZ$ 400 but it decline to NZ$ 200 in 2002, after 2002 it rapidly increased to NZ$ 900 in 2008 and maintain a slight variation untill 2014. On the otherhand, China spend least amount to New Zealand. In 1996 China use less than NZ$ 100, in 2004 it inclined to NZ$ 500 but in 2008 ot decreased again. In the case of Japan, the visitors spend about NZ$ 400 in 1996 and 2014, only in 2002 they spend NZ$ 1000 to New Zealand.
The graph
illustrate
the amount
spend
by the tourists from five
different
countries, Australia, USA, UK, Japan and China between the period of 1996 to 2014.
Overall
expenditure
shows
an increased trend of spending by every country till 2014 and
also
the highest annual visitors from Australia and the lowest visitors from China in all time
In addition
, Australia
spend
highest
amount in 2006 and it
drop down
in 2008. In the case
of USA
they
spend
around
NZ$
750 in 1996 and a gradual increase in spending till 2010
but
in 2014 it declined.
Initially
UK
spend
NZ$
400
but
it
decline
to
NZ$
200 in 2002, after 2002 it
rapidly
increased to
NZ$
900 in 2008 and maintain a slight variation
untill
2014. On the
otherhand
, China
spend
least
amount to New Zealand. In 1996 China
use
less than
NZ$
100, in 2004 it inclined to
NZ$
500
but
in 2008
ot
decreased again. In the case of Japan, the visitors
spend
about
NZ$
400 in 1996 and 2014,
only
in 2002 they
spend
NZ$
1000 to New Zealand.
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IELTS academic Visitor spend every year from 1996 to 2014 by tourist in 5 countries including Australia, USA, UK, Japan and China. Units are measured in NZ$.

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