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The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (s) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school

The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (s) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school 9Ayr

The pictorial representation depicts the town of the Canterbury which includes Country side, housing, Town Center and University, And also give two sites which are preferrable areas planned to built a new school. Overall, it can be seen that, In term of S1 site placed at country side. From the ton centre to country side, the length is at about 7000km, whereas the length of place is less but the population is higher. Then, the North region of the country side situated at university. Likewise, housing also occurs in between the same and town centre which has no traffic zone. Moving towards site S2, which is passed over through the corner of the east part of the country side that is approximately 7km to Chartham where distance and population become longer and less respectively. So, there is no chance to get more students from S2 location. At the end, S1 is suitable location to build up a new school because of population is higher than other location.

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Country
 side, housing, Town Center and University, And also
 give two sites which are Possible spelling mistake found.preferable
preferrable
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to built
 a new school. Overall
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seen
 that, In term of S1 site placed at You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 side. From the ton Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 side, the length is at about Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "7000 km"7000 km
7000km
, whereas the length of place is less This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the population is higher. Then, the North region of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 side situated at university. Likewise
, housing also
 occurs in between the same and town Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 which has no traffic zone. Moving towards site S2, which is passed
 over through the corner of the east part of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
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 approximately Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "7 km"7 km
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 to Possible spelling mistake found.Chart ham
Chartham
 where distance and population become longer and less respectively
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, there is no chance to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 more students from S2 location. At the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
, S1 is suitable location to build up a new school This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of population is higher than other location. 