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The chart below gives information about levels of education by age range in the UK in 2010.

The chart below gives information about levels of education by age range in the UK in 2010. YnWj
The provided bar graph illustrates the data about the proportion of education pattern of the English people into five different age groups in 2010. Overall, it can be seen that, UK citizens coaching form greatly varies based on their ages and elderly population over 75 years were mostly uneducated. As clearly observed that, 71% of the UK people between 16-24 years old have completed their university degree, while roughly 20% of them were school certified and rest of masses have no any qualification. Likewise, around above tenth of the young britishians were passed their schooling, however remaining 71% were degree holders. Interestingly, almost similar pattern followed among the first three given age groups with no studies during the period of 2010. Moving further, In UK, the highest ratio between 30-35 age groups and also lower among the no qualification and school certification with 7% and 20% respectively. Furthermore, the rate of folks who were belong to 50-75 ages have university degree with the increase in ages and reverse trend observed for without qualification and school certification. Finally, the number of UK pupils were school certified when they were over 75 years old.
The provided bar graph illustrates the data about the proportion of education pattern of the English
people
into five
different
age
groups in 2010.
Overall
, it can be
seen
that, UK citizens coaching form
greatly
varies based on their
ages
and elderly population over 75 years were
mostly
uneducated. As
clearly
observed that, 71% of the UK
people
between 16-24 years
old
have completed their university degree, while roughly 20% of them were
school
certified and rest of masses have
no
any qualification.
Likewise
, around above tenth of the young
britishians
were passed
their schooling,
however
remaining 71% were degree holders.
Interestingly
, almost similar pattern followed among the
first
three
given
age
groups with no studies during the period of 2010. Moving
further
, In UK, the highest ratio between 30-35
age
groups and
also
lower among the no qualification and
school
certification with 7% and 20%
respectively
.
Furthermore
, the rate of folks who were
belong
to 50-75
ages
have university degree with the increase in
ages
and reverse trend observed for without qualification and
school
certification.
Finally
, the number of UK pupils were
school
certified when they were over 75 years
old
.
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IELTS academic The chart below gives information about levels of education by age range in the UK in 2010.

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