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The first chart illustrated why people visit abroad of UK and the second chart give the information where they go between in 1994-1998. Overall, we can see (except 1994) year by year travelled abroad slightly increased. On the other hand Western Europe is the most popular destination for go abroad. In the first table, holiday and visits to friends and relatives reasons gradually rosed for the period. Holiday was in 1994 15, 246 and in 1998 it become 20, 700. Business and other reasons slowly fell in 1994 between 1995. Then business increased year by year and in 1998 it become 3957. Otherwise other reason also increased however in 1998 it dropped and gave the result 990. In the second chart the destinations which they are Western Europe, North America and other areas moderatly dropped between in 1994 and 1995. In 1996 the all areas climbed year after year. We can obviously see people preferred go abroad to Western Europe. In 1998 the result is 24, 519. At the same time North America and other areas are 1, 823 and 2, 486 respectively.
The
first
chart illustrated why
people
visit
abroad
of UK and the second chart give the information where they go between in 1994-1998.
Overall
, we can
see
(except 1994)
year
by
year
travelled
abroad
slightly
increased. On the
other
hand Western Europe is the most popular destination for go
abroad
. In the
first
table, holiday and visits to friends and relatives reasons
gradually
rosed
for the period. Holiday was in 1994 15, 246 and in 1998 it
become
20, 700. Business and
other
reasons
slowly
fell in 1994 between 1995. Then business increased
year
by
year
and in 1998 it
become
3957.
Otherwise
other
reason
also
increased
however
in 1998 it dropped and gave the result 990. In the second chart the destinations which they are Western Europe, North America and
other
areas
moderatly
dropped between in 1994 and 1995. In 1996 the all areas climbed
year
after
year
. We can
obviously
see
people
preferred go
abroad
to Western Europe. In 1998 the result is 24, 519. At the same time North America and
other
areas are 1, 823 and 2, 486
respectively
.
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IELTS academic visit abroad by uk residents by purpose of visit

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