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The first chart illustrated why people visit abroad of UK and the second chart give the information where they go between in 1994-1998. Overall, we can see (except 1994) year by year travelled abroad slightly increased. On the other hand Western Europe is the most popular destination for go abroad. In the first table, holiday and visits to friends and relatives reasons gradually rosed for the period. Holiday was in 1994 15, 246 and in 1998 it become 20, 700. Business and other reasons slowly fell in 1994 between 1995. Then business increased year by year and in 1998 it become 3957. Otherwise other reason also increased however in 1998 it dropped and gave the result 990. In the second chart the destinations which they are Western Europe, North America and other areas moderatly dropped between in 1994 and 1995. In 1996 the all areas climbed year after year. We can obviously see people preferred go abroad to Western Europe. In 1998 the result is 24, 519. At the same time North America and other areas are 1, 823 and 2, 486 respectively.

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