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Mode of transport and years

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The given diagram shows data about the number of percentage of commuters of different modes of transportation in one European city between 1960, 1980 and 2000. Overall, the number of people using cars which is growing from 1960 to 2000. However, transport of commuters using bus had decreased considerably from 1960 to 2000. The number of people using trains rose just under 20% in 1960 to about 26% in 1980, however, then fell back to about 23% in 2000. On the other hand, use of the tube has decreased from about 27% in 1960 to 22% in 1980, then climbing back to reach 25% in 2000. Meanwhile, the use of cars increased sharply from about 7% in 1960 to 23% in 1980 and then rising quickly to almost 40% by 2000. On the contrary, the number of people using buses has declined rapidly since 1960, falling from just under 35% in 1960 to 27% in 1980 and reaching only 15% in 2000.

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given
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shows
 data about the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of percentage of commuters of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 modes of transportation in one European city between 1960, 1980 and 2000.

Overall
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 using cars which is growing from 1960 to 2000. However
, transport of commuters using bus had decreased considerably
 from 1960 to 2000.

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number
 of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 using trains rose This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 under 20% in 1960 to about 26% in 1980, however
, then fell back to about 23% in 2000. On the other hand
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of the tube has decreased from about 27% in 1960 to 22% in 1980, then climbing back to reach 25% in 2000. Meanwhile, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of cars increased sharply
 from about 7% in 1960 to 23% in 1980 and then rising quickly
 to almost 40% by 2000. On the contrary
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 using buses has declined rapidly
 since 1960, falling from This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 under 35% in 1960 to 27% in 1980 and reaching This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 15% in 2000. 