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Overall, it is a seven stage, man-made, and linear process, commencing from harvesting olive fruits from the trees and culminating the packing it into as final product to be sold.

Overall, it is a seven stage, man-made, and linear process, commencing from harvesting olive fruits from the trees and culminating the packing it into as final product to be sold. q1RlX

Overall, it is a seven stage, man-made, and linear process, commencing from harvesting olive fruits from the trees and culminating the packing it into as final product to be sold. First of all, olive beans are harvested from the trees. Secondly, harvested olives are milled to by removing branches and other wastes. After that, a water is added to milled olives; then, this mixed milled olives are pressed with heavy pressure. Subsequently, the pressed olives are separated fresh olive oil; afterward, a little bit water is mixed to the separated olive oil in this stage. Finally, the olive oil is bottled and sticked a address; in other word, reedy-made is ready to be delivered to supermarket.

Overall
, it is a seven stage, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
-made, and linear process, commencing from harvesting olive fruits from the trees and culminating the packing it into as final product to be sold
.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, olive beans are harvested
 from the trees. Secondly
, harvested You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbeigedrabkhakibrownish
olives
are milled
 to by removing branches and other wastes. After that, Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "water".water
a water
 is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to milled You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbeigedrabkhakibrownish
olives
; then, this mixed milled You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbeigedrabkhakibrownish
olives
are pressed
 with heavy pressure.

Subsequently
, the pressed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbeigedrabkhakibrownish
olives
are separated
 fresh olive oil; afterward, a Reduce redundancy by using "little" or "bit".littlebit
little bit
 water is mixed
 to the separated olive oil in this stage. Finally
, the olive oil is bottled
 and Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "stuck", the past tense form of the verb 'stick'?stuckstackedstickerstockedtickedslicked
sticked
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 address; in other word, reedy-made is ready to be delivered
 to supermarket. 