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Overall, it is a seven stage, man-made, and linear process, commencing from harvesting olive fruits from the trees and culminating the packing it into as final product to be sold.

Overall, it is a seven stage, man-made, and linear process, commencing from harvesting olive fruits from the trees and culminating the packing it into as final product to be sold. q1RlX
Overall, it is a seven stage, man-made, and linear process, commencing from harvesting olive fruits from the trees and culminating the packing it into as final product to be sold. First of all, olive beans are harvested from the trees. Secondly, harvested olives are milled to by removing branches and other wastes. After that, a water is added to milled olives; then, this mixed milled olives are pressed with heavy pressure. Subsequently, the pressed olives are separated fresh olive oil; afterward, a little bit water is mixed to the separated olive oil in this stage. Finally, the olive oil is bottled and sticked a address; in other word, reedy-made is ready to be delivered to supermarket.
Overall
, it is a seven stage,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
man
-made, and linear process, commencing from harvesting olive fruits from the trees and culminating the packing it into as final product to
be sold
.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, olive beans
are harvested
from the trees.
Secondly
, harvested
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
olives
are milled
to by removing branches and other wastes. After that,
Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "water".
a water
is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
added
to milled
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
olives
; then, this mixed milled
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
olives
are pressed
with heavy pressure.

Subsequently
, the pressed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
olives
are separated
fresh olive oil; afterward, a
Reduce redundancy by using "little" or "bit".
little bit
water
is mixed
to the separated olive oil in this stage.
Finally
, the olive oil
is bottled
and
Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "stuck", the past tense form of the verb 'stick'?
sticked
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
address; in other word, reedy-made is ready to
be delivered
to supermarket.
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IELTS academic Overall, it is a seven stage, man-made, and linear process, commencing from harvesting olive fruits from the trees and culminating the packing it into as final product to be sold.

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116 words
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