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use of transport and reasons for using car

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The piechart depicts the information on transport that people preffer to use in Edmontom and the table provides information on people's reasons for using the car in the city. The data is calibrated in percentage. Overall, people preffered car to all other transport. To begin with, car is most used with 45% in total. Followed by light rail transit at second most used at 35%. Both bus and taxi shared 10%. People used car double than the taxi and bus combnied. More than half of the people used to commute to work with 55%. business and taking children to school were nearly at same level with 45 and 40 proportion. Shopping and leisure activities are least used at 15% each.
The
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depicts the information on transport that
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preffer
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in
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Edmontom
and the table provides information on
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people
's reasons for using the
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car
in the city. The data
is calibrated
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Overall
,
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preffered
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car
to all other transport.

To
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is most
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used
with 45% in total. Followed by light rail transit at second most
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used
at 35%. Both bus and taxi shared 10%.
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People
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used
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than the taxi and bus
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More than half of the
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to commute to work with 55%.
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business
and taking children to school were
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at 15% each.
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IELTS academic use of transport and reasons for using car

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
120 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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