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the chart below describes books sales of Famous Book Store in 2001.

the chart below describes books sales of Famous Book Store in 2001. 2b81k
The left pie chart gives the information about sold books of the store while the right one shows the data of people buying those books. Overall, it is indicated from the first pie chart that the bookstore earned primarily from selling parental guidelines, psychological books and cooking references. What is more, people in the age of 25 to 50 were the major customers of this store. Three best seller books from this store were parenting, cooking and psychology. Upbringing references accounted for the largest sales of the bookstore, about 25%. Following the first profitable application books were cooking and psychology with 22% and 18% respectively. In the contrast, 7% was the revenue that came from selling economic articles. Besides, loyal customers of this store aged from 25 to 50, regardless of gender. They accounted for 26% for the average. Women over 50 and under 25 who ranked at second highest number of people buying books from this constituted the similar rate at 14%. The remaining males were less likely to own books from this store, making up around 11%.
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while the right one
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pie chart that the bookstore earned
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in the age of 25 to 50 were the major customers of this store.

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best seller
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from this
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were parenting, cooking and psychology. Upbringing references accounted for the largest sales of the bookstore, about 25%. Following the
first
profitable application
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books
were cooking and psychology with 22% and 18%
respectively
. In the contrast, 7% was the revenue that came from selling economic articles.

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, loyal customers of this
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aged from 25 to 50, regardless of gender. They accounted for 26% for the average. Women over 50 and under 25 who ranked at second highest number of
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buying
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from this constituted the similar rate at 14%. The remaining males were less likely to
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, making up around 11%.
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