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Usage of mobile phone and landlines in various countries

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The Bar graph illustrates the number of Mobile Phone and Landlines per 100 people in selected Countries. From an overall perspective, it can be illustrated that Landlines are the most preferred by Canada, US and Germany than mobile phones. The highest amount of Mobile phones are from Italy which is 90 approximately and is closely followed by Sweden with only 2 people. However, cell phones are the least preferred by Canadians which is accounted to be 38 out of 100 people. Analyzing further more, people from Denmark are use Mobile Phones and Landlines are with most identical which is 82 and 88 respectively. The usage of Mobile phones when compared to Landlines in Italy is more than double. Mobile Phones are most used by countries like US, Sweden. However, in case of Germany it is slightly lower. All in all, it is worthy enough to prove that people in Italy are more dependent on Mobile Phones rather than Landlines.
The Bar graph illustrates the number of Mobile
Phone
and Landlines per 100
people
in selected Countries.

From an
overall
perspective, it can
be illustrated
that Landlines are the most preferred by Canada, US and Germany than mobile
phones
. The highest amount of Mobile
phones
are from Italy which is 90 approximately and is
closely
followed by Sweden with
only
2
people
.
However
, cell
phones
are the least preferred by Canadians which
is accounted
to be 38 out of 100
people
.

Analyzing
further
more,
people
from Denmark are
use
Mobile
Phones
and Landlines are with most identical which is 82 and 88
respectively
. The usage of Mobile
phones
when compared to Landlines in Italy is more than double. Mobile
Phones
are most
used
by countries like US, Sweden.
However
, in case of Germany it is
slightly
lower.

All in all, it is worthy
enough
to prove that
people
in Italy are more dependent on Mobile
Phones
rather
than Landlines.
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IELTS academic Usage of mobile phone and landlines in various countries

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
159 words
6.5
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