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The given diagram illustrates the process how ethanol fuel produced from corn.

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The given diagram illustrates the process how ethanol fuel produced from corn. Overall, this process starts with storing corn and ends with transporting the ethanol fuel. We can see that the longest term of this process is fermenting corn for 48 hours after cooking for 4 hours. First of all, the process begins with storing the corn and miling it before cooking. Then the corn is cooked for 4 hours with water before fermenting it for 48 hours. The next part of this process is separate the corn and solid by product. After separating the corn this process continue with purifing ethanol with liquid for 5 hours. Finally, after purifying ethanol with for 5 hours, we can see that the process will end by storing the ethanol fuel and transport.
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fuel produced from corn.

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and ends with transporting the
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fuel. We can
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that the longest term of this
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is fermenting
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for 48 hours after cooking for 4 hours.

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and
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it
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cooking. Then the
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is cooked
for 4 hours with water
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fermenting it for 48 hours.

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part of this
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is separate the
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and solid by product. After separating the
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this
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continue with
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purifing
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with liquid for 5 hours.

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, after purifying
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with for 5 hours, we can
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that the
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by storing the
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fuel and transport.

IELTS academic The given diagram illustrates the process how ethanol fuel produced from corn.

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