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The maps depict an island before and after some renovation works for tourists and compares the changed on the island for the constructions.

The maps depict an island before and after some renovation works for tourists and compares the changed on the island for the constructions. 5XEm

The maps depict an island before and after some renovation works for tourists and compares the changed on the island for the constructions. Generally speaking, many new facilities have been constructed for tourists, including accommodations, restaurant, swimming facilities etc. and those have been built without affecting the natural resources that much. Before the facilities were constructed, there was only trees and beach on the island and most of the places were empty. In this island, many new tourists’ facilities have been made including accommodation facilities, restaurant, reception centre, pier for boating, swimming facility on the beach and so on. Interestingly plants and trees were not cut down to build these constructions and most of the constructions were made near the beach. Besides, footpaths and roads for commuting have been built to facilitate the tourists. The footpaths were made to walk between the residing places and the beach while the motor tracks were created to visit the restaurant, reception area, and pier for boating. In summary, the construction was mainly made to facilitate the tourists' stay, visit and amusement and for that, no plants or trees were cut.

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tourists
, including accommodations, restaurant, swimming facilities etc. and those have been built
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Before
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, there was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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island
 and most of the places were empty. In this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
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many
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tourists’
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centre
, pier for boating, swimming facility on the beach and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
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cut
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constructions
 and most of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentmanufacturesystemplanningplanstructure
constructions
were made
 near the beach.

Besides
, footpaths and roads for commuting have been built
 to facilitate the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvisitorsightseertraveler
tourists
. The footpaths were made
 to walk between the residing places and the beach while the motor This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitors
tracks
were created
 to visit the restaurant, reception area, and pier for boating.

In summary, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentmanufacturesystemplanningplanstructure
construction
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 made to facilitate the tourists' stay, visit and amusement and for that, no plants or trees were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
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. 