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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. pq3L

The line graph illustrates the information about how many millions of people visited a Caribbean island over the period of seven-years between 2010 and 2017. Overall, it is seen that the trend of visiting a particular island of Caribbean is increased over the time, in particularly; there was a dramatic rose in the year 2016 to 2017. In addition, tourists who stayed in campsites were more than persons who stayed in ships and it remained same uptill middle of 2015 but after that campsite visitors decreased then the visitors who stayed in ships. From the given data, it is evident that the number of tourists who stayed in cruise ship in 2010 was 0. 25 million that increased to 0. 5 million in 2011 and then decreased to again approximately to 0. 26 million in 2012. Afterwards, in the years 2013-2017 there was a slight increase in number of tourists who stayed in ship and it went up, up to 2 million at the end of 2017. According to the graph, visitors staying in campsite were round about 0. 75 million in 2010 and 2011 and then there was an increasing trend till 2015 but afterwards it dropped to 1. 5 million in 2017. Total tourists who visited island started from 1 million and in seven-year time period there was a remarkable increase to 3. 5 million especially in 2016 to 2017 there was a steady change.

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