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Usage of different modes of transportation by European.

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The given bar chart illustrates the usage of different transport for travelling by European from 1960 to 2000. overall, usage of cars was increased throughout the given time period while the popularity of bike and foot was decreased. During 1960, walking was very popular around 35 percent of people like it whereas cars were the least popular which was only 5%. Around 20 to 25% of people travelled bus and bike. In 1980, buses were used much as a means of transport which accounts for 25%. The usage of cars were inclined dramatically (by 18 %)and in case of bike and walk, sharp decrease was noticed. At last in 2000, the percentage of car users was reached at the peak of 35. Buses was also second highly used as means of transport around 15 percent of traveller use this. Lastly under 10 percent of people were interested in bike and in walking.
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transport for travelling by European from 1960 to 2000.

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overall
, usage of
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cars
was increased
throughout the
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time period while the popularity of
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bike
and foot
was decreased
.

During 1960, walking was
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very
popular around 35 percent of
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people
like it whereas
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cars
were the least popular which was
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5%. Around 20 to 25% of
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people
travelled bus and
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bike
. In 1980, buses were
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used
much as a means of transport which accounts for 25%. The usage of
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cars
were inclined
dramatically
(by 18 %)and in case of
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bike
and walk, sharp decrease
was noticed
.

At last in 2000, the percentage of
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car
users
was reached
at the peak of 35. Buses was
also
second
highly
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used
as means of transport around 15 percent of
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Lastly
under 10 percent of
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and in walking.

IELTS academic Usage of different modes of transportation by European.

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