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USA lobar from 1930 and 2010 graph

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The information that labor force in America from 1930 to 2010 is depicted by line graph From overall perspective, it readily apparent that expect the Farming labor force, other types of labor showed upwards trend in given time period With regard to cultivation labor, decreasing from 75%to 60% In 1930 to 1970. Before going to reach at dip the percentage of farming labor was 35% in 1990. Farming, fishing and foresting then plunged with exponential throughout the period. In 1930, the percentage of industrial labor force fluctuated between 5%to 20% till 1980. There was dramatic increase observed in percentage of industrial labor force, it accounted to 38% in 2010 Moving further, the rate of technical and sales was 2 in 1930. In next years, it accounted less than quarter. After years, Increasing by 38%. There was only 10% difference between technical and sales office in 2010. Other services constant growth till end of the 2010

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 in America from 1930 to 2010 is depicted
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Before
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labor
 was 35% in 1990. Farming, fishing and foresting then plunged with exponential throughout the period. In 1930, the percentage of industrial You use this word too often, consider replacing it withjobindustryemploymentenergyactivity
labor
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withviolenceeffortstrength
force
 fluctuated between 5%to 20% till 1980. There was dramatic increase observed in percentage of industrial You use this word too often, consider replacing it withjobindustryemploymentenergyactivity
labor
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withviolenceeffortstrength
force
, it accounted to 38% in 2010

Moving further
, the rate of technical and sales was 2 in 1930. In next
 years, it accounted less than quarter. After years, Increasing by 38%. There was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 10% difference between technical and sales office in 2010. Other services constant growth till This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
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