Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The tabe gives information about female workforce and female managers in five countries

The tabe gives information about female workforce and female managers in five countries LG6K1
The table ptovides information about the perecentages of girle how were a managers and workfoce in five difference countries. Overall, The united states was most popular country of both types (workforce and managers), while Egypt was the least populer. Australia rat was about 42% in workfoce being higher than managers rate by approximataly 41%. However, the figure showed Egypt has got 20% in workfoce was the least populer in all countrice, and 12% in managers. Then pecentage of women who were workforce in Japan was quite leas than Australia woman by only 1 perecentag. while in mangemant were got sami rate of Egypt. Moreover, the figure experienced rate of woman workforce in srilanka by almost 37%, also that was least perecentage of manager in all countrice by only 9%. Furthermore, The united states rate was about 46% in workforce, That was moste popular in all, In contact, women managers has got highest perecentages by almost 43% compered of all others countrice.
The table
Possible spelling mistake found.
ptovides
information about the
Possible spelling mistake found.
perecentages
of
Possible spelling mistake found.
girle
how were a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
managers
and
Possible spelling mistake found.
workfoce
in five difference countries.
Overall
, The
The proper noun "United States" needs to be capitalized.
united states
was
Did you mean "the most"?
most
popular country of both types
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
(workforce
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
managers)
, while Egypt was the least
Possible spelling mistake found.
populer
.

Australia rat was about 42% in
Possible spelling mistake found.
workfoce
being higher than
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
managers
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rate
by
Possible spelling mistake found.
approximataly
41%.
However
, the figure
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
showed
Egypt has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
20% in
Possible spelling mistake found.
workfoce
was the least
Possible spelling mistake found.
populer
in all
Possible spelling mistake found.
countrice
, and 12% in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
managers
. Then
Possible spelling mistake found.
pecentage
of women who were
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
workforce
in Japan was quite leas than Australia woman by
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
1
Possible spelling mistake found.
perecentag
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
while
in
Possible spelling mistake found.
mangemant
were
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
Possible spelling mistake found.
sami
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rate
of Egypt.

Moreover
, the figure experienced
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rate
of woman
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
workforce
in
Possible spelling mistake found.
srilanka
by almost 37%,
also
that was least
Possible spelling mistake found.
perecentage
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
manager
in all
Possible spelling mistake found.
countrice
by
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
9%.
Furthermore
, The
The proper noun "United States" needs to be capitalized.
united states
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rate
was about 46% in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
workforce
, That was
Possible spelling mistake found.
moste
popular in all, In contact, women
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
managers
has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
highest
Possible spelling mistake found.
perecentages
by almost 43%
Did you mean the verb "compared" or the noun "compèred" (master of ceremonies)?
compered
of all others
Possible spelling mistake found.
countrice
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The tabe gives information about female workforce and female managers in five countries

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
161 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 6.5band
    diagram of cement and concrete
    Concrete is one of the most popular materials in the construction world, whether it’s being used for building houses or used to build pavements. This practical piece of material is made from cement. Our journey to acquire concrete and the cement production process start with limestone and clay being...
  • 5band
    The maps illustrate the main changes which have takes place in COLWick Arts Centre from 2005
    The maps illustrate the main changes which have takes place in COLWick Arts Centre from 2005 to the present moment. Overall, the center expanded and new recreational facilities such as cinema café and drama studio. At present outside area dramatic change happening, trees were planted and outdoor ex...
  • 5band
    The bar chart shows the Transport preferences among young peoples from three countries
    The bar chart provides information about the vehicle list among juvenile people of Four different countries. Overall, Car is the most chosen Transport system while, the bicycle is on the second and Motorcycle is less used transport between all. As the graph shows, Cars is The most of popular way tra...
  • 6.5band
    Percentage of people who ate five portions per day
    This chart shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruits and vegetables per day in the United Kingdom. The survey was set from 2001 to 2008. The survey started from 2001, when 10% to 15% children, 15% to 20% men and around 20% to 25% of women had 5 portions of a full day work. With ...
  • 6.5band
    bar chart shows households
    In this day and age, certain people hold the idea that human beings are granted multiple options. I wholeheartedly agree with this point of view that sophisticated technology has given us various choices. In the following essay, reasons will be discussed and supported by relevant examples. To comme...
  • 6.5band
    top ten countries consume electricity
    The bar chart illustrates ten countries that produced and consumed electricity in 2014. Overall, China had made and used more electricity, and on contrary, Korea had produced and consumed less electricity during 1 year. In detail, China obviously has the most production and consumption among all co...