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 Bar Chart: Sample 5 (Time Series) The bar chart illustrates the level of oil production in 6 countries from 1990 to 2010. The corresponding data is given in millions of barrels. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Bar Chart: Sample 5 (Time Series) The bar chart illustrates the level of oil production in 6 countries from 1990 to 2010. The corresponding data is given in millions of barrels. bQPqg
The bar chart illustrates the approximate capacity of oil production for 6 countries in the Gulf from the year 1990 to 2010. Overall, the oil production capacity for most of the countries had increased marginally while Saudi Arabia had produced the highest amount of oil throughout the entire time period. As seen from the graph, Saudi Arabia produced over 8 million barrels in 1990, and its production capacity soared above 14 million barrels in 2010. On the other hand, Qatar produced the lowest number of barrels. The figure stood close to 0. 5 million in 1990, increasing slightly in 2000, only to fall back to the same amount in 5 years, remaining unchanged until the end of the period. Furthermore, the rest of the countries only had a slight increase in production, following a similar trend. Iran started at just over 2 million barrels in 1990, and its production capacity rose to approximately 4 million barrels in 2010, with Iraq, Kuwait and UAE having slightly lower figures, under 4 million by 2010
The bar chart illustrates the approximate
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of oil
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production
for 6 countries in the Gulf from the year 1990 to 2010.

Overall
, the oil
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production
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capacity
for most of the countries had increased
marginally
while Saudi Arabia had produced the highest amount of oil throughout the entire time period. As
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seen
from the graph, Saudi Arabia produced over 8
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million
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barrels
in 1990, and its
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production
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capacity
soared above 14
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million
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barrels
in 2010.
On the other hand
, Qatar produced the lowest number of
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barrels
. The figure stood close to 0. 5
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million
in 1990, increasing
slightly
in 2000,
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only
to fall back to the same amount in 5 years, remaining unchanged until the
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end
of the period.
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had a slight increase in
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production
, following a similar trend. Iran
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over 2
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million
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in 1990, and its
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production
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capacity
rose to approximately 4
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million
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in 2010, with Iraq, Kuwait and UAE having
slightly
lower figures, under 4
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by 2010
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IELTS academic Bar Chart: Sample 5 (Time Series) The bar chart illustrates the level of oil production in 6 countries from 1990 to 2010. The corresponding data is given in millions of barrels.

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