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University subjects chosen , 2005

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The bar chart shows the number of male and female students choosing to study 8 different subjects when they learn university in 2005In general, it can be seen that in 8 different subjects, social sciences was one of the most subject female students wanted to learn, while science and mathematics remained the most preferred subjects among boys. All of female want to study non — science subjects, like social sciences, languages, the arts; . . . . . Specially, the number of girls with choices ranged from the highest number of just under 25 thousand to the lowest number of just under 10 thousand, a difference of around 15 thousand. In non-science subjects, social sciences had the highest choices from womenHowever, fewer girls chose to study mathematics, sciences than boys. The number of female with choices ranged from the highest number just over 10 thousand to the lowest number just under 5 thousand. Interestingly, the net figure for Humanities were equal at 12000 each for both sexes
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IELTS academic University subjects chosen , 2005

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
166 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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