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university sports centre at present and future.

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The two maps show the changes that occured in university sports centre at present and future. Overall, a closer look at the map highlights the fact that the biggest change in the maps is the disappeance of outdoor courts which will replaced by leisure pool and sports hall. In the south west of the map, the changing room and the sports shop will build. In the south east of it, the caffee and the changing room will construct. In the middle of the map, the reception, seating, changing room and the pool will remain. In the north east of the map, the outdoor coursts will demolish to make the sports hall. The dance studio will appear. The gym will lengthen.
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at present and future.

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highlights the fact that the biggest
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in the
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is the
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disappeance
of outdoor courts which will replaced by leisure pool and
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hall.

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south west
of the
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, the changing room and the
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shop will build. In the
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south east
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caffee
and the changing room will construct.
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In
the middle of the
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, the reception, seating, changing room and the pool will remain.

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the
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of the
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, the outdoor
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coursts
will demolish to
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hall. The dance studio will appear. The gym will lengthen.
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