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number of chanAa wave-energy machine and the different locations of machines with different productivitiesges which took place in frenton

number of chanAa wave-energy machine and the different locations of machines with different productivitiesges which took place in frenton KWRdR
The diagrams illustrate how electricity is generated from a wave-energy machine and the different locations of machines with different productivities Overall, a closer look at the diagrams highlights the fact that the process of generating electricity includes three main stages beginning with containing water and ending with producing electricity. The process begins with the water directly going into the chambers at certain levels. In the next following step, air flow is blown into the chamber and its direction is reversed and to be blown onto the air again. In other words, this motion of air flow play an important role on rotating a pair of turbine. Finally, the process continuing with the production of electricity of a engine called electricty generator thanks to the turbine rotating. In addition, the wave-energy machines can be ordered in serveral location underwater. The more deeper the machine reachs, the more productivity it brings about and the more price for installation.
The diagrams illustrate how electricity
is generated
from a wave-energy
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machine
and the
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different
locations of
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machines
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productivities


Overall
, a closer look at the diagrams highlights the fact that the process of generating electricity includes three main stages beginning with containing water and ending with producing electricity.

The process
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begins
with the water
directly
going into the chambers at certain levels. In the
next
following step, air flow
is blown
into the chamber and its direction
is reversed
and to
be blown
onto the air again.
In other words
, this motion of air flow play an
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important
role on rotating a
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pair of turbine
.
Finally
, the process continuing with the production of electricity of
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a
engine called
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electricty
generator thanks to the turbine rotating.

In addition
, the wave-energy
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machines
can
be ordered
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serveral
location underwater. The
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more deeper
the
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machine
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reachs
, the more productivity it brings about and the more price for installation.
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IELTS academic number of chanAa wave-energy machine and the different locations of machines with different productivitiesges which took place in frenton

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