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university’s sport centre

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The maps demostrate a university’s sport centre at the present and its planned changes after reconstruction. As can be seen from the plans, this university sport centre has undergo several significant changs. The most striking changes are the development of the two outdoor courts and the addition of various sports facilities. At present, in the middle of the center is a large building. In addition, have two outdoor courts to the west and east. Inside the building, the reception has driectly opposite the main entrance. In addition, a 25 meter long swimming pool has halfway between the reception and the gym. The changing room area is to the left of the reception and to the right is the seating room. According to the second map, the outdoor courts is to the east converted into a big sports hall and two studios for dancing, while a large leisure pool will be constructed in the outdoor courts is to the west. The university sport centre will also be two additional changing rooms, a new cafe and a sports shop on on either side of the main entrance. The gym is planned to double in size. Meanwhile, other parts of the centre will remain unchanged.
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demostrate
a university’s
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sport
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centre
at the present and its planned
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changes
after reconstruction.

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seen
from the plans, this university
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sport
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centre
has
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several significant
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changs
. The most striking
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changes
are the development of the two
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outdoor
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courts
and the addition of various
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sports
facilities.

At present, in the middle of the center is a large building.
In addition
, have two
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outdoor
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courts
to the west and east. Inside the building, the reception has
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driectly
opposite the main entrance.
In addition
, a
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25 meter long
swimming pool has halfway between the reception and the gym. The changing room area is to the
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left
of the reception and to the right is the seating room.

According to the second map, the
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outdoor
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courts
is to the east converted into a
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big
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sports
hall and two studios for dancing, while a large leisure pool will
be constructed
in the
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outdoor
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courts
is to the west. The university
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sport
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centre
will
also
be two additional changing rooms, a new
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cafe
and a
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sports
shop
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on on
either side of the main entrance. The gym
is planned
to double in size. Meanwhile, other parts of the
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centre
will remain unchanged.
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