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The graph below gives information from a 2008 REPORT ABOUT CONSUMPTION OF EBERGY IN THE usa SINCE 1980 WITH PROJECTUONS UNTIL 2030.

The graph below gives information from a 2008 REPORT ABOUT CONSUMPTION OF EBERGY IN THE usa SINCE 1980 WITH PROJECTUONS UNTIL 2030. EwLgR
The line graph elucidates the information given in an report in 2008 about the consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. units are measured in quadrillions. U. S. Energy consumption by petrol and oil is at 35 quadrillion units and got a rapid decrease till 1985 and started to boom to 47 quadrillion by the year 2030. Coal usage was at 16 quadrillion units and reached to 30 at the year 2030 and Natural gas at initial it was 20 and it got depreciation rapidly and coincides with coal at the year 1990 and kickstarts again and reaches the saturation point at 2015 where it again coincides with coal and repots 25 by the year 2030. The nuclear, solar and Hydropower were initially same at 6 quadrillion units till 1985 after that there was a breaking point between them and Nuclear starts to gradually increase and reached 7 in 2030 and Solar stands behind it and marks 5 in 2030 finally hydro power and solar were same till 1995 and hydropower got a decrease from the year 1995 and remains same till 2030 from 2010 at 3 quadrillion units.
The line graph elucidates the information
given
in
an
report in 2008 about the consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.
units
are measured
in quadrillions.

U. S. Energy consumption by petrol and oil is at 35 quadrillion
units
and
got
a rapid decrease till 1985 and
started
to boom to 47 quadrillion by the
year
2030.

Coal usage was at 16 quadrillion
units
and reached to 30 at the
year
2030 and Natural gas at initial it was 20 and it
got
depreciation
rapidly
and coincides with coal at the
year
1990 and
kickstarts
again and reaches the saturation point at 2015 where it again coincides with coal and
repots
25 by the
year
2030. The nuclear, solar and Hydropower were
initially
same at 6 quadrillion
units
till 1985 after that there was a breaking point between them and Nuclear
starts
to
gradually
increase and reached 7 in 2030 and Solar stands behind it and marks 5 in 2030
finally
hydro power
and solar were same till 1995 and hydropower
got
a decrease from the
year
1995 and remains same till 2030
from 2010 at 3
quadrillion
units
.
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IELTS academic The graph below gives information from a 2008 REPORT ABOUT CONSUMPTION OF EBERGY IN THE usa SINCE 1980 WITH PROJECTUONS UNTIL 2030.

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