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The chart illustrates that the both rural and urban areas' unemployment rate as a percentage over the four-time period within a year. As be seen clearly in the chart, the difference between the two areas' jobless rate shrinks at the end of the period given. In the beginning, rural areas' unemployment rate stands at approximately 6, 5% which is the highest rate in the period, and then, nearly by the end of the second quarter, decrease sharply at the level of 4, 5%. Between second and fourth quarters, it is more stabilize than the first half of the year and stand at 5% end of the period. As for urban areas, the unemployment rate has an increasing trend that begins with nearly 2% and ends with almost 5%. Though its increasing trend, it has a decreasing performance falling net 2% between second and third quarter. Overall, at the end of the year, the jobless rate between two areas has come close to each other and met nearly at 5%.
The chart illustrates that the both rural and urban areas' unemployment
rate
as a percentage over the four-time period within a year. As be
seen
clearly
in the chart, the difference between the two areas' jobless
rate
shrinks at the
end
of the period
given
.

In the beginning, rural areas' unemployment
rate
stands at approximately 6, 5% which is the highest
rate
in the period, and then,
nearly
by the
end
of the second quarter, decrease
sharply
at the level of 4, 5%. Between second and fourth quarters, it is more stabilize than the
first
half of the year and stand at 5%
end
of the period.

As for urban areas, the unemployment
rate
has an increasing trend that
begins
with
nearly
2% and
ends
with almost 5%. Though its increasing trend, it has a decreasing performance falling net 2% between second and third quarter.

Overall
, at the
end
of the year, the jobless
rate
between two areas has
come
close to each other and met
nearly
at 5%.
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IELTS academic unemployment rates between rural areas and urban areas

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