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unable to make balance in personal and professional life

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it is an undesirable fact that people try to create a balance in their professional and personal life. However, only a few people are able to achieve it. In this essay, we will discuss the main causes and their solutions. To embark upon, one of the most prominent causes of imbalance would be extra duty hours. This is because their goal was not fulfilled. So, they had to put extra effort, resulting in more time in the office and less time in work. Additionally, in some professions, rotational shift is compulsory, which sometimes create hassel as we can not stay in fixed time at home. For instance, the most of healthcare worker do rotational duty ashospital opens for 24 hours. However, it can be solved by choosing duty with fixed hours. This can help in scheduling time for family. Moreover, we can also avoid spending extra hours in office so, we can spend longer duration with family members. For example, going on trip once a week, which make our relationship better with others. In conclusion, although, majority of population unable to maintain balance in personal and professional life due to not fixed working hours and extra duties, it can be solved by making proper time table and avoid extra duties.
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are able to achieve it. In this essay, we will discuss the main causes and their solutions. To embark upon, one of the most prominent causes of imbalance would be
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their goal was not fulfilled.
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, they had to put
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effort, resulting in more
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in the office and less
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in work.
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professions, rotational shift is compulsory, which
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at home.
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worker do rotational
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ashospital
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for family.
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hours
in office
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, we can spend longer duration with family members.
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our relationship better with others.

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population unable to maintain balance in personal and professional life due to not
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IELTS academic unable to make balance in personal and professional life

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
210 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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