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Bar chart percentage of donations

Bar chart percentage of donations 2R9KA

The bar chart represents the percentage of British people in different age groups from 1990 to 2010 who donated their money. It shows that the out of people belonging to different age groups, middle age groups donated the maximum. In 1990, percentage of donations was the highest by the individuals between 36 to 50. In the starting, young adults were least intrested towards in charitable work. But, with the age catching up, people less spent on charity. When crossed 50 they was slightly decline donation from 13% to 20%. In the middle group they indulged in the work. In 2020 the percentile of charitable work was increased

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