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The reason why adults decide to study and how people think the costs of adults education

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The pie chart and bar diagram illustrate reason why adults decide to study and how people think the costs of adult education. Overall, adults interested in subjects and gain qualification is higher to that of people who decide to study. Furthermore, the cost of each course one third by individual. According to adults decision of studies mostly they choose courses by interest it’s of 40%. But also to gain qualification is also largely taken by adults is 38%. Although some adults decide by helpful for current shop taken is 22%. Furthermore, To improve prospects of promotion and enjoy studies precisely similar of 20 percentage. Finally, least Taken by adults able to change job is 12% and to meet people is 9%. The cost of adults education approximately 1 to 40 percentage of cost is individual. Employees cost is 35% and rest of the cost for the education is tax paid 25 percentage.
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study
and how
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think
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costs
of adult education.

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,
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adults
interested in subjects and gain qualification is higher to that of
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people
who decide to
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study
.
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, the
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cost
of each course one third by individual.

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adults
decision of
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studies
mostly
they choose courses by interest it’s of 40%.
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decide by helpful for
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shop taken is 22%.
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improve
prospects of promotion and enjoy
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studies
precisely
similar of 20 percentage.
Finally
, least Taken by
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adults
able to
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change
job is 12% and to
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meet
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people
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adults
education approximately 1 to 40 percentage of
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is individual. Employees
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is 35% and rest of the
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for the education is tax paid 25 percentage.
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IELTS academic The reason why adults decide to study and how people think the costs of adults education

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
152 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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