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The chart below gives the information about the demand of people in Fergana city, for different cars in 2018. Summuarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives the information about the demand of people in Fergana city, for different cars in 2018. Summuarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. XDBRP
The bar demonstrates the difference between the demands of people in Fergana for six types of vehicles: Gentra, Matiz, Nexia 3, Cobalt, Spark and Captiva; in 2018. Overall, demand for Gentra had the highest share, while Matiz ranked the last. Although, the second biggest figure was reported for Spark at the same time that the shares for Nexia 3 and Cobalt were the same. There was a tremendous difference between the proportions of Gentra and Matiz, with the former of Gentra standing first with 90%. As for Nexia 3 and CObalt, the latters were responsible for the same amount of 65% for both cars. Furthermore, the disparity between the two figures of Spark and Captiva was one fifth, which in the former, Spark had the highest proportion with 80%
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Gentra
,
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Spark
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; in 2018.

Overall
, demand for
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Gentra
had the highest share, while
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Matiz
ranked the last. Although, the second biggest figure
was reported
for
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Spark
at the same time that the shares for
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Nexia
3 and Cobalt were the same.

There was a tremendous difference between the proportions of
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Gentra
and
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Matiz
, with the former of
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Gentra
standing
first
with 90%.

As for
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Nexia
3 and
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CObalt
, the
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latters
were responsible for the same amount of 65% for both cars.
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, the disparity between the two figures of
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and
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Captiva
was one fifth, which in the former,
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Spark
had the highest proportion with 80%
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IELTS academic The chart below gives the information about the demand of people in Fergana city, for different cars in 2018. Summuarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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