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UK and Australian cinema admissions, 1975 to 2005

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The line graph elucidates the information on cinema admission in the countries like the UK and Australia in the span of 30 years. The admission is measured in terms of millions. Overall, there were fluctuations in the entire given period for the acceptance in the movie house. In the year 1975, 20 million people had enrolled in the movie theatre in Australia. There were varying enrollments till the year 1985. After that, there was a sharp increase in the peak of the enrollments. In 1990, it had reached 40 million acceptance. By 1995, it had crossed the UK and had 80 million admissions. From the year 1995-2006, it was stagnant. It was the lowest out of the two countries. In the year 1975, there were 100 million enrollments in the country UK. However, there was a fluctuating change till the year 1996. After that, there was an increasing trend in an upward direction. In the year 1996, 140 million people had enrolled. By the year, 2001 there were more than 160 admissions. On the contrary, there was a minimal change in the year 2005 and it was somewhere around 140 million enrollments. Hence, by the end of the interval, UK was leading 80 million acceptance in comparison to Australia.
The line graph elucidates the information on cinema
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admission
in the countries like the UK and Australia in the span of 30 years. The
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admission
is measured
in terms of
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millions
.
Overall
, there were fluctuations in the entire
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given
period for the acceptance in the movie
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house
. In the
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year
1975, 20
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million
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people
had enrolled in the movie
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theatre
in Australia. There were varying
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enrollments
till the
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year
1985. After that, there was a sharp increase in the peak of the
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enrollments
. In 1990, it had reached 40
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million
acceptance. By 1995, it had crossed the UK and had 80
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million
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admissions
. From the
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year
1995-2006, it was stagnant. It was the lowest out of the two countries. In the
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year
1975, there were 100
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million
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enrollments
in the country UK.
However
, there was a fluctuating
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change
till the
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year
1996. After that, there was an increasing trend in an upward direction. In the
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year
1996, 140
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million
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people
had enrolled. By the
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year
, 2001 there were more than 160
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admissions
.
On the contrary
, there was a minimal
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change
in the
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year
2005 and it was somewhere around 140
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million
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enrollments
.
Hence
, by the
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end
of the interval, UK was leading 80
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million
acceptance
in comparison
to Australia.
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IELTS academic UK and Australian cinema admissions, 1975 to 2005

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