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The chart below shows how many trip to and from school students in one country made in 1990 and 2010 using different modes of transportation. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows how many trip to and from school students in one country made in 1990 and 2010 using different modes of transportation. 95w1r
The bar chart gives information about the number of trip that pupils used for going and return back from school in one country during two decades from 1990 and 2010. Overall, among the five travelling methods, walking was the most popular method used in 1990, while car passenger was used most by pupils in 2010. In 1990, it can be seen that walking was the most selected method for commuting to school with over 12 million of trip made by children. This number was almost 4 times higher than the number of car passenger which was just over 4 million. Meanwhile, numbering at around 6 million trips made by the other three methods were practically identical. In 2010, it is clear that the number of each method was dramatically decreased almost threefold, except the number of car passenger. This figure rose sharply to over 11 million over the period. In contrast, for walking method which was the most popular way in 1990, dropped to half in 6 million, yet still placed in the second. Lastly, travelled by bus, walking and bus, and cycling were at 5 million, 3 million and two million respectively.
The bar chart gives information about the
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number
of trip that pupils
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used
for going and
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return back
from school in one country during two decades
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from 1990 and 2010
.
Overall
, among the five travelling
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methods
, walking was the most popular
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method
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used
in 1990, while car passenger was
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used
most by pupils in 2010.

In 1990, it can be
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seen
that walking was the most selected
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method
for commuting to school with
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over
12
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million
of trip made by children. This
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number
was almost 4 times higher than the
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number
of car passenger which was
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just
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over
4
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million
. Meanwhile, numbering at around 6
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million
trips made by the other three
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methods
were
practically
identical.

In 2010, it is
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clear
that the
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number
of each
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method
was
dramatically
decreased almost threefold, except the
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number
of car passenger. This figure rose
sharply
to
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over
11
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million
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over
the period.
In contrast
, for walking
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method
which was the most popular way in 1990, dropped to half in 6
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million
,
yet
still
placed in the second.
Lastly
, travelled by bus, walking and bus, and cycling were at 5
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million
, 3
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million
and two
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million
respectively
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IELTS academic The chart below shows how many trip to and from school students in one country made in 1990 and 2010 using different modes of transportation.

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