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U.S. Energy Consumption by Fuel (1980-2030)

U. S. Energy Consumption by Fuel (1980-2030) qLEYw

The graph below shows data from a 2008 analysis about use of energy in the USA since 1980 with plan up till 2030. According to the graph, it is clear that petrol and oil has been the main resource of energy since 1980, morover the resource’s consumption tends to rise by the projection until 2030, while hydropower has been least used fuel for decades and most likely to keep it’s position. In 1980 quantity of consumption by petrol and oil was 35 quadrillion units, however it’s use has rised during period of 1995 to 2005, morover it’s importance is tending to rise up to 50 quadrillion units by 2030. Similar action is pictured to coal, by 1980 need of coal’s requirement was around 16 quadrillion units, it’s use is most likely to double by 2030. Natural gas utilization has been stabilized since 2010 and it is predicted to keep the level until 2030. In contrast needs of nuclear, solar/wind, hydropower was same amount of 5 quadrillion units by 1980. These fuels were used 4 times less than natural gas and 7 times less than petrol and oil in 1980. By looking at the graph it is planned not to utizile so much. Nuclear will be used up to 7 quadrillion units, solar/wind is going to be used around 4 quadrillion units while hydropower hits the lowest point of 3 quadrillion units by 2030.

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