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Typical meals of usa by three types of nutrients

Typical meals of usa by three types of nutrients Pgqyd
The pie charts provide information regarding the three types of nutrients (Sodium, Saturated fats, sugar) Which are consumed by people of usa in each typical meals (breakfast, dinner, lunch, snacks) Overall, the trend of typical meals consumed in the usa showed that while eaten too much is hamper for health though on the dinner time highest number of sodium and saturated fat were used. Meanwhile highest sugar used on snacks time. The same ratio of sodium was used breakfast and snack time. Similary same ratio of fat and sugar were used during breakfast. In terms of the most significant feature of the charts in the dinner time 43% sodium and 37% saturated were used but sugar used less amount by 23%. Similar trend are followed by during launch time 29% Sodium, 26% Saturated fat and 19% sugar. In stark contrast highest number of sugar was used during snacks time by 42%, sodium and saturated fat also used by 14% and 21%. Fat and sugar both used 16% in during breakfast sugar used 2% lower.
The pie charts provide information regarding the three types of nutrients (Sodium,
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in each typical meals (breakfast, dinner, lunch, snacks)

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highest
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sugar
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on snacks
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. The same ratio of sodium was
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breakfast and snack
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during breakfast.

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43% sodium and 37%
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less amount by 23%. Similar trend
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29% Sodium, 26%
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and 19% sugar.

In stark contrast
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by 42%, sodium and
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16% in during breakfast
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2% lower.
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