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The supplied maps represents how the Civic Square in Smallville has changed from 1980 to nowadays.

The supplied maps represents how the Civic Square in Smallville has changed from 1980 to nowadays. 8aVRP
The supplied maps represents how the Civic Square in Smallville has changed from 1980 to nowadays. Overall, the biggest changes are responsible by the car park whereas some significant place in town are remain unchanged namely the town hall and the post office. In 1980, most of the square space was a large car park surrounded by two rows of norfork Pine. There was a small garden in the west of these tree and a row combined with restaurants and shops on the eastern side. Additionally, the town hall was in the north of car park whereas the post office stayed in the south-eastern corner. Regarding the present map, the original car park has been replaced by a mulyi-storey car park and was putted on the north-west corner. All the tree rows has gone to built some new garden seats and a circle area with a fountain and a statue in the middle. The library also has been constructed inside the garden while the shops on the opposite side have remained but mostly cafes and restaurants.
The supplied maps
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Smallville
has
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changed
from 1980 to nowadays.

Overall
, the biggest
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changes
are responsible by the
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car
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park
whereas
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some
significant place in town are
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remain
unchanged
namely
the town hall and the post office.

In 1980, most of the square space was a large
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car
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park
surrounded by two rows of
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norfork
Pine. There was a
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small
garden in the west of these tree and a row combined with restaurants and shops on the eastern side.
Additionally
, the town hall was in the north of
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car
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park
whereas the post office stayed in the south-eastern corner.

Regarding the present map, the original
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car
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park
has
been replaced
by a
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mulyi-storey
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car
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park
and
was putted
on the north-west corner. All the tree rows has gone to built
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some
new garden seats and a circle area with a fountain and a statue in the middle. The library
also
has
been constructed
inside the garden while the shops on the opposite side have remained
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but
mostly
'cafes' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "cafés"
cafes
and restaurants.
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IELTS academic The supplied maps represents how the Civic Square in Smallville has changed from 1980 to nowadays.

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