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The given map represent the development of Chorleywood village over four different periods from 1868 to 1994.

The given map represent the development of Chorleywood village over four different periods from 1868 to 1994. 95bWW
The given map represent the development of Chorleywood village over four different periods from 1868 to 1994. Overall, it can be seen that there was more and more significant changes over the time especially in years between 1970 and 1994. In the first period from 1968 to 1983 the village has only two main roads with a small residential area along the left road. After that, the village’s habitant kept on increase sharply on the right side by more than three times until 1970 then there has been constructed a new railway right above the citizen’s dwellings and a Chorleywood station to serve the railway. It can be seen that from the year 1922 to 1970, it has a large expandation in population but mainly along the train tracks and in the corner between the mainroad and the railway. A new motorway which has been built in 1970 create with railway and main road a Chorleywoods’ park and golf course area. Finally, in the last period between 1970 and 1994, the population in this village rose signicantly and was almose equal to the sum of all previous increases/expansion.
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map represent the development of
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Chorleywood
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village
over four
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different
periods from 1868 to 1994.

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, it can be
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seen
that there was more and more significant
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changes
over the time
especially
in years between 1970 and 1994.

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first
period from 1968 to 1983 the
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village
has
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only
two main roads with a
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small
residential area along the
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left
road. After that, the
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village’s
habitant
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kept
on increase
sharply
on the right side by more than three times until 1970 then there has
been constructed
a new
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railway
right above the citizen’s dwellings and a
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Chorleywood
station to serve the
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railway
. It can be
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seen
that from the year 1922 to 1970, it has a large
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expandation
in population
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but
mainly
along the train
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tracks
and in the corner between the
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mainroad
and the
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railway
. A new motorway which has
been built
in 1970 create with
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railway
and main road a
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Chorleywoods
’ park and golf course area.
Finally
, in the last period between 1970 and 1994, the population in this
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rose
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signicantly
and was
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almose
equal to the sum of all previous increases/expansion.
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IELTS academic The given map represent the development of Chorleywood village over four different periods from 1868 to 1994.

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