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the graph shows Uk acid rain amission, measured in million of tonnes, from four differnt, between 1990 to 2007

the graph shows Uk acid rain amission, measured in million of tonnes, from four differnt, between 1990 to 2007 BlKoV
The line chart gives information about the quality of acid rain emission in the UK from four distinct sectors for 17 years, measured by million tonnes. The overview can be seen that there was a sharp decline in the quality of acid rain emission of Electric, Gas and Water Supply, Other industries, Domestic except for Transport and Communication which has a slight increase for 17 years. Electric, Gas and Water Supply in 1990 having the quality of acid rain achieved approximately 3, 4 million tonnes from 1997 this figure declined rapidly just under 1, 5 million tonnes. In five next years, it fluctuated around 1, 3 to 1 million tonnes then, the quality of acid rain emission in Electric, Gas and Water Supply went down at 0, 7 million tonnes. In contrast, Transport and Communication in 1990 having the quality of rain achieved approximately 0, 7 million tonnes was lower than Electric, Gas and Water Supply but it climbed slightly about 1 million tonnes in 2005 and came back 0, 7 million tonnes in 2007. On the other hand, Other industries and Domestic had the trend decline, flowed by dropping from 2, 1 to 1, 3 million tonnes and 0, 6 to 0, 2 million tonnes.
The line chart gives information about the
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emission in the UK from four distinct sectors for 17 years, measured by
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The overview can be
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emission of Electric,
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and
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Water
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Supply
, Other industries, Domestic
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Transport and Communication which has a slight increase for 17 years.

Electric,
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and
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Water
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Supply
in 1990 having the
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achieved approximately 3, 4
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emission in Electric,
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went down at 0, 7
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achieved approximately 0, 7
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tonnes was lower than Electric,
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