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changes in operation of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.

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The rendered illustration delineates the information about changes in operation of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. At a glance different between average distance in miles travelled per person per year is seen. The table data clearly shows that in 1985 year, average walking distance is 255 miles per human per year. in 2000 year, average walking distance is decreased by 237 miles per person per year. In 1985 and 2000 year, 18 miles walking distance per soul per year. In 1985 year, per human per year, average car distance is 3199 miles. When in 2000 year, per person per year, average car distance is increased by 4806 miles. difference between 1985 and 2000 year, average car distance is very high 1607 miles. Overall, the information about 1985 year in all modes average distance is 4740 miles per human per year. 2000 year in all modes average distance is 6475 miles per person per year.
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IELTS academic changes in operation of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.

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