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the two maps below illustrates the development of the village of ryemouth between the period 1995 and now, it is clear from the graph that many sites redeveloped to new ones, according to what is shown the housing remained the same and had increased from 12 houses to 16 house, while the farmland and the forest park demolished to a golf and tennis court located in the east, the shop redeveloped to a restaurant, and the fish market transferred to a ab apartments, in addition there is a car park added next to the hotel, while the fishing port was removed from the new site, to sum up we could say that the present site faced many changes including more houses and a new golf site and a car park, while many places demolished into new sites which lead to a new village with exciting places to visit, while the instructor remained the same but the places changed as it is shown

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ryemouth
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now
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
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sites
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new
 ones, according to what is shown
 the housing remained the same and had increased from 12 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 to 16 Possible agreement error. The noun 'house' seems to be countable, so consider using: "houses".houses
house
, while the farmland and the forest park demolished to a golf and tennis court located in the east, the shop redeveloped to a restaurant, and the fish market transferred to Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
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next
 to the hotel, while the fishing port was removed
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new
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site
, to sum up we could say that the present You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectionspotscenestationlocationhome
site
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many
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houses
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new
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 places demolished into You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
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sites
 which lead to a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
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but
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changed
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