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The bar chart illustrates the total time spent by teenagers doing 7 activities in a week in Chester over the course of 6 years (2002 to 2007).

The bar chart illustrates the total time spent by teenagers doing 7 activities in a week in Chester over the course of 6 years (2002 to 2007). mL11L
The bar chart illustrates the total time spent by teenagers doing 7 activities in a week in Chester over the course of 6 years (2002 to 2007). Overall, the proportion of hours watching television throughout all the years was by far the greatest; however, other activities such as bowling consistently accounted for the least hour times. The hours spent on other pastimes fluctuated as time passed by throughout the given period. Certain technology-based activities such as watching television, had a stable level of 25 hours for 2 years before facing a gradual increase and peaking at abut 37 hours in 2007. Whereas interests such as clubbing and shopping faced repeating surges and plateaus; provided that they started at 7 and 6 hours respectively, the figures eventually even out at 12 hours for clubbing in 2004 until 2006 and at 11 hours for shopping for the same time frame. There was a significant jump in hours spent, from 12 to 17, at clubs between 2006 and 2007. Yet, going to the mall reaches a maximum of 15 hours in the final year. On the other hand, the remaining activities started off well with a median of 9. 5 hours but faced a steady slope of decline where they all eventually measure about 10 hours or less.
The bar chart illustrates the total
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spent by
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teenagers
doing 7
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activities
in a week in Chester over the course of 6 years (2002 to 2007).

Overall
, the proportion of
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hours
watching television throughout all the years was by far the greatest;
however
, other
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activities
such as bowling
consistently
accounted for the least
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hour
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times
. The
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spent on other pastimes fluctuated as
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passed by throughout the
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given
period.

Certain technology-based
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activities
such as watching television, had a stable level of 25
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hours
for 2 years
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before
facing a gradual increase and peaking at abut 37
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hours
in 2007. Whereas interests such as clubbing and shopping faced repeating surges and plateaus; provided that they
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started
at 7 and 6
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hours
respectively
, the figures
eventually
even out at 12
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hours
for clubbing in 2004 until 2006 and at 11
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hours
for shopping for the same
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time
frame. There was a significant jump in
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hours
spent, from 12 to 17, at clubs between 2006 and 2007.
Yet
, going to the mall reaches a maximum of 15
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hours
in the final year.

On the other hand
, the remaining
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activities
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started
off well with a median of 9. 5
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but
faced a steady slope of decline where they all
eventually
measure about 10
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hours
or less.
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IELTS academic The bar chart illustrates the total time spent by teenagers doing 7 activities in a week in Chester over the course of 6 years (2002 to 2007).

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