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Look at the question and then look at the diagram and try to understand what the data means. For example, from this graph we understand that how many 18-25 year aduilts were studying at universities in these Countries.

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The line graph illustrates the percentage of 18-25year olds enrolled in tertiary education programs in four countries from 1961 to 2011. Overall, it can be seen that Singapore had the highest proportion of 18-25 year olds studying at universities for majority of given time period. Also, there was an increase in the proportion opting for higher education in all the countries. In 1961, the proportion of 18-25year Thais enrolled in university was 25 and it was followed by Singapore at 15%. By contrast, the percentage studying at universities in Philippines and Malaysia was only 7% and 2% respectively. From 1961 to 1991, there was a slight decrease in the proportion from Thailand studying at universities, while the proportion increased slightly to around 15% for both Malaysia and Philippines. In Singapore also, the proportion rose but with fluctuations and in 1991, about 35% of 18-25year were enro in Over the last decades from 1991 to 2011, the proportion of Singaporean, Filipino and Thai 18- 25year olds went up, whereas the figure in Malaysia remained unchanged. In 2011, the percentages studying at universities stood at around 40% in Singapore and Thailand, while the figures for Philippines and Thailand was considerably lower at 15% and 10% respectively.
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olds enrolled in tertiary education programs in four countries from 1961 to 2011.
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opting for higher education in all the countries. In 1961, the
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proportion
of
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18-25year
Thais enrolled in
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was 25 and it
was followed
by Singapore at 15%. By contrast, the percentage
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studying
at
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universities
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in Philippines
and Malaysia was
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only
7% and 2%
respectively
. From 1961 to 1991, there was a slight decrease in the
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proportion
from Thailand
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universities
, while the
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proportion
increased
slightly
to around 15% for both Malaysia and Philippines. In Singapore
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rose
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with fluctuations and in 1991, about 35% of
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18-25year
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in Over the last decades from 1991 to 2011, the
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proportion
of Singaporean, Filipino and Thai 18-
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25year
olds went up, whereas the figure in Malaysia remained unchanged. In 2011, the percentages
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stood at around 40% in Singapore and Thailand, while the figures
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