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depicts the number of females per 100 males

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This bar chart depicts the number of females per 100 males in three different school education levels over eight years. It's clear from the graph the female's students’ numbers were higher in 1998 than in 1990. According to what is shown the overall number of female students in developed countries in three different education level are higher than developing countries. In addition, in primary and secondary education, the numbers of girls were almost near to the target, and in tertiary education were exceeded the target. In developing countries, girls’ numbers ber 100 boys in primary education were much higher than the female student numbers in secondary and tertiary education level. To sum up, we could say that there are slight differences between female numbers in both 1990 and 1998. Also, the female student's numbers in developing countries were near the target in the only primary education, whereas in secondary
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levels over eight years. It's
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from the graph the female's students’
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were higher in 1998 than in 1990.

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students in developed
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level are higher than developing
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, in primary and secondary
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, the
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of girls were almost near to the target, and in tertiary
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were exceeded
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In developing
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, girls’
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100 boys in primary
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were much higher than the
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in secondary and tertiary
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level.

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female
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in both 1990 and 1998.
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, the
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student's
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in developing
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were near the target in the
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IELTS academic depicts the number of females per 100 males

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148 words
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