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two maps show the road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. summerise the information

two maps show the road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. N8O52
Given is an illustration of modification of road network to get to the hospital in an urban environment from 2007 to 2010. The overall alterations that can be seen in the pictures can be divided into three catagories which are associated with parking lot spaces, road system and public transportation facilities. As it is apparent from the provided ma. the bus stop stations have been transformed to one side of the hospital road, thus they were compacted into an exclusive space with accessibility to the road from two sides. Furthermore, the intersection of city road and hospital road was replaced by a roundabout which has a pathway to bus station, also the enterance of ring road was turned to a roundabout. Although the parking lot location have not been changed, it's landuse was altered as well as it's capacity. As in 2010, there were 2 parking one in the east side of hospital road and the other on next to the ring road. As it is evident the parking space on right side of the east side is assigned to empolyees only and the one in ring road is a public parking space.
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is an illustration of modification of
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road
network to
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get
to the
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hospital
in an urban environment from 2007 to 2010.

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overall
alterations that can be
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seen
in the pictures can
be divided
into three
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catagories
which
are associated
with
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parking
lot
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spaces
,
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road
system and public transportation facilities.

As it is apparent from the provided ma. the bus
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stop
stations have
been transformed
to one side of the
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hospital
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road
,
thus
they
were compacted
into an exclusive
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space
with accessibility to the
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road
from two
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sides
.
Furthermore
, the intersection of city
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road
and
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hospital
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road
was replaced
by a roundabout which has a pathway to bus station,
also
the
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enterance
of ring
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road
was turned
to a roundabout. Although the
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parking
lot location have not been
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changed
, it's
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landuse
was altered
as well
as it's capacity. As in 2010, there were 2
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parking
one in the east side of
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hospital
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road
and the other on
next
to the ring
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road
. As it is evident the
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parking
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space
on right side of the east side
is assigned
to
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empolyees
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only
and the one in ring
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road
is a public
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parking
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space
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IELTS academic two maps show the road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.

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193 words
6.0
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