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The diagram details the life cycle of a pine tree (sporophyte).

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The diagram details the life cycle of a pine tree (sporophyte). Overall, there are several stages in the cycle, including the combination of various components of the tree’s pinecones and the combined cell’s growth. At first, the pine tree is guaranteed to give out 2 types of cone-related cells that represent 2 genders, which are seed cone (female) and pollen cone (male). The female cell found in the pinecone consists of megasporocyte and megasporangium surrounded by ovule, while the male one located at the bottom of the pine tree’s branches contains microsporangium and microsporocyte. Undergoing meiosis, the former is next embiggened in order to hold megaspores that will die shortly after except one. Simultaneously, meiosis causes the male cell to become pollen grain, which then enters the enlarged female cell and attaches to its edge through pollination. Afterward, the united cell starts its development with pollen tubes being grown from the pollen grain and archegonium being made inside the surviving megaspore that is expanded. After a period of time, the elongating pollen tubes eventually reach the archegonium and start covering them to create sperm and egg. Following this, thanks to fertilization, both egg and sperm are able to mature into a zygote, then seeds that can be found in the upper area of the pinecone. Once the seeds find an ideal environment, the early stage of the tree (embryo) is mutilated inside the seed by absorbing food. Finally, the embryo goes through the seed coat to grow into a seedling, then a pine tree, which repeats the cycle.
The diagram
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details
the life cycle of a
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pine
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tree
(
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sporophyte
).
Overall
, there are several stages in the cycle, including the combination of various components of the
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tree’s
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pinecones
and the combined
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cell’s
growth.

At
first
, the
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pine
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tree
is guaranteed
to give out 2 types of cone-related
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cells
that represent 2 genders, which are
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seed
cone (female) and
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pollen
cone (male). The female
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cell
found in the
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pinecone
consists of
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megasporocyte
and
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megasporangium
surrounded by ovule, while the male one located at the bottom of the
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pine
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tree’s
branches contains
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microsporangium
and
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microsporocyte
. Undergoing meiosis, the former is
next
embiggened in order to hold
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megaspores
that will
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die
shortly after except one.
Simultaneously
, meiosis causes the male
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cell
to become
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pollen
grain, which then enters the enlarged female
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cell
and attaches to its edge through pollination.

Afterward, the united
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cell
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starts
its development with
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pollen
tubes
being grown
from the
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pollen
grain and
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archegonium
being made
inside the surviving
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megaspore
that
is expanded
. After a period of time, the elongating
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pollen
tubes
eventually
reach the
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archegonium
and
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start
covering them to create sperm and egg. Following this, thanks to fertilization, both egg and sperm are able to mature into a zygote, then
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seeds
that can
be found
in the upper area of the
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pinecone
. Once the
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seeds
find an ideal environment, the early stage of the
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tree
(embryo)
is mutilated
inside the
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seed
by absorbing food.
Finally
, the embryo goes through the
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seed
coat to grow into a seedling, then a
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pine
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tree
, which repeats the cycle.
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