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Two maps below show the road to city hospital in 2007 to 2010

Two maps below show the road to city hospital in 2007 to 2010 7WYr5
Hospital is one of the most significant places, it must be situated in every area and also easily accessible to people at times of emergency we will now examine the route to City Hospital City Hospital is situated at the center of the Ring Road. In 2007 to reach the City Hospital one should travel through the City road and take a right one can arrive at hospital right-hand side of the road there is a copper for staff and public. In 2010 the place where City Hospital is located has drastically change back in 2007 there was only one route to reach the City Hospital which is the hospital route there are much high possibilities of a traffic jam in 2010a new roundabout has been established one can travel in the northwest direction and when your bus stop has been developed and thick and other roundabout and which city hospital and can avoid much traffic and reach faster earlier there was a single car park near to the hospital common to staff and public later improvisation has been done and two separate carp arks or available one for staff another one for public City Hospital group has drastically changed in the past years and Has been more convenient in many ways to benefit public
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in every area and
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examine the route to City Hospital

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at the center of the Ring Road. In 2007 to reach the City
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Hospital
one should travel through the City road and take a right one can arrive at
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hospital
right-hand side of the road there is a copper for staff and public. In 2010 the place where City
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Hospital
is located
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drastically
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change
back in 2007 there was
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one route to reach the City
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Hospital
which is the
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hospital
route there are much high possibilities of a traffic jam in 2010a new roundabout has
been established
one can travel in the northwest direction and when your bus
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stop
has
been developed
and thick and other roundabout and which city
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hospital
and can avoid much traffic and reach faster earlier there was a single car park near to the
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hospital
common to staff and public later improvisation has
been done
and two separate carp arks or available one for staff another one for
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public


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Hospital
group has
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ways to benefit public
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