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Two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information and important features and make comparisons where relevant

Two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Nk2y
The maps above illustrate the tourism developments introduced on an island. Overall, the island has undergone significant infrastructural development for becoming a tourist attraction. Only the palm trees to the east and the beach to the westernmost end are left untouched. A reception is built at the heart of its landmass. On the southern part, a pier has been constructed for the convenience of vacationers. Comfortable accommodation for the visitors is located on the eastern and western vicinities of the reception respectively. A restaurant is located at the northern end, with a panoramic view of the ocean. Trails for vehicles and sidewalks for pedestrians are laid all over the island, ensuring good connectivity to all locations. The beach is located at the westernmost point and the eastern part of the island has been left untouched. The western shores are used as a tourist attraction with the coast designated for swimming.
The maps above illustrate the tourism developments introduced on an island.

Overall
, the island has undergone significant infrastructural development for becoming a tourist attraction.
Only
the palm trees to the east and the beach to the westernmost
end
are
left
untouched.

A reception
is built
at the heart of its landmass. On the southern part, a pier has
been constructed
for the convenience of vacationers. Comfortable accommodation for the visitors
is located
on the eastern and western
vicinities
of the reception
respectively
. A restaurant
is located
at the northern
end
, with a panoramic view of the ocean. Trails for vehicles and sidewalks for pedestrians
are laid
all over the island, ensuring
good
connectivity to all locations. The beach
is located
at the westernmost point and the eastern part of the island has been
left
untouched. The western shores are
used
as a tourist attraction with the coast designated for swimming.
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IELTS academic Two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
150 words
6.5
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