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Two given pie charts for ielts and illustrations

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The given two pie charts illustrate how the Eastern and Western parts of a country performed in agricultural production. Overall, in the eastern side meat production was the highest, while grain is the least agricultural product. Western region of the country grain was the most produced food, on the other hand vegetable production worst performing at that time. To begin with, the Eastern part of the country had meat being n the top of agricultural produce. It recorded 35 percent, which was closely followed by dairy products which represented nearly a third of all products. Clearly, vegetables and grains were the least farm yields that were recorded at one-fifth and 15 percent respectively. On the other hand, the Western region, grain took a junk of fraction at 46 percent, followed by meat bellow it by 11 percent. Dairy products recorded 15 percent and lastly vegetables took the pinch at a 5 percent fraction.
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two pie charts illustrate how the Eastern and Western parts of a country performed in agricultural production.

Overall
, in the eastern side meat production was the highest, while
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grain
is the least agricultural
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product
. Western region of the country
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grain
was the most produced food,
on the other hand
vegetable production
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performing at that time.

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begin
with, the Eastern part of the country had meat being n the top of agricultural produce. It recorded 35
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percent
, which was
closely
followed by dairy
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products
which represented
nearly
a third of all
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products
.
Clearly
, vegetables and
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grains
were the least farm yields that
were recorded
at one-fifth and 15
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percent
respectively
.

On the other hand
, the Western region,
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grain
took a junk of fraction at 46
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percent
, followed by meat bellow it by 11
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percent
. Dairy
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products
recorded 15
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and
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vegetables took the pinch at a 5
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fraction.
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IELTS academic Two given pie charts for ielts and illustrations

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