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The given pie chart indicates that why people opt for bicycle or car in order to cummute.

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The given pie chart indicates that why people opt for bicycle or car in order to cummute. Overall, while less pollution and health were main contributors to chose bike, comfort factor was considered as main reason for driving to work. The neligible number of people guessed that cycling was faster than driving. When it comes to reasons for cycling to commute, less pollution and health and fitness categories surpassed the others, rating 30%. 15% of people thought that using bike was superior to driving car, as it did not lead to parking problem. Although the figure for cost-sensetive people accounted for merely 13%, only 12% of commuters believed that cycling is better way than driving car to arrive work. With regard to factors which people's using automobile to get to work, the pattern for category of comfort comprised 40 percent. Approximately a two fifth of total number said that they prefered car to bicycle, taking into account long distance to work place. The proportion of people driving car because of being faster accounted for 14% and the same number of people need car to carry items to work place. Safety factor concerned solely 11% of people.
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guessed that cycling was faster than driving.

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to reasons for cycling to commute, less pollution and health and fitness categories surpassed the others, rating 30%. 15% of
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, as it did not lead to parking problem. Although the figure for
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cost-sensetive
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accounted for
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12% of commuters believed that cycling is
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to arrive work.

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's using automobile to
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, the pattern for category of comfort comprised 40 percent. Approximately a two fifth of total number said that they
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to bicycle, taking into account long distance to
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place. The proportion of
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people
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to carry items to
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