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Study the pie chart and write a paragraph of 130-160 words to describe it.

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Today, technology play important role in our life. Espcially, online resources can help we do lots of things. We have a pie chart recorded Students' use of online resources at intel secondary school library in 2014. Overview, The interactive game has high precent in the pie chart next is Fictions e-books and another. Interactive game is popular with 30%. Fiction e-book less interting than interactive game but it still has a fifth percent. In other hand, Online magazine at 18%.
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use
of online resources at intel secondary school library in 2014.

Overview, The interactive game has high
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precent
in the pie chart
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is Fictions e-books and another.

Interactive game is popular with 30%. Fiction e-book less
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but
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has a fifth percent. In other hand, Online magazine at 18%.
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IELTS academic Study the pie chart and write a paragraph of 130-160 words to describe it.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
80 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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